Some Thoughts on The Short Sun

In my review/exhortation to read of Gene Wolfe’s Book of the Short Sun, I avoided spoilers.  I will not do so here, regarding my thoughts on certain details of these books.

SilkHorn and Babbie the Hus

Horn dies on Green and the Neighbors — aboriginal alien inhabitants of Green & Blue — place him into the body of Silk aboard the Whorl, where he was in the process of killing himself over his wife Hyacinth’s death.  Although the narrator mentions that he has changed physically by the time he has returned to Blue, and makes a few slips suggesting he’s not all himself mentally in Blue’s Waters, this is not made explicit until Green’s Jungles.  Horn may also have “died” somehow after falling into a pit in Blue’s Waters, but there may be a more mundane explanation.

The most confusing part of the series during my initial read was the end of On Blue’s Waters.  Horn is fleeing from a pack of inhumi out to kill him, clearly near panic, and then…some stuff happens, it’s not clear…and the book ends, with him basically safe.  The narrator’s voice changes substantially in Green’s Jungles, although it took me a few chapters to notice (it’s Silk now).  On re-read, the change occurs quite clearly on the last page of Blue’s Waters.

After some consultation with urth.net archives and a re-read, it’s clear that Horn left “his” body and passed into the hus named Babbie (an animal similar to a boar) with the aid of the Neighbors.  Presumably he hoped to throw the inhumi off his trail, and/or to force Silk to “take over”.  This causes the confused narration at the end of Blue’s Waters to make sense, fulfills an earlier prophecy that he would ride a beast with three horns (Babbie has two horns/tusks, the third horn being Horn himself), and explains some unusual behavior shown by Babbie in Return to the Whorl.  While it’s obvious that Silk becomes more dominant in the narrator as the story progresses (culminating with Silk finally acknowledging himself), and I did not detect the break, it clearly happened and other bits of information in the book point to it.  It’s an awful sacrifice on Horn’s part; something I found really quite shocking when I understood what had happened.

Now, things are not as simple as “Horn is gone, Silk is the captain now”.  Silk was clearly “there” before Horn’s “escape”.  For instance, Horn made it clear at the end of Long Sun that he despised the vulgar and vicious prostitute Hyacinth, but the narrator of Blue’s Waters is entranced by the memory of her beauty.  Likewise, in Return to the Whorl, the narrator’s knowledge of boats and sailing implies that a bit of Horn remains within him.  I also wonder that Horn might not have made his “escape” into Babbie had he not carried the influence of the sometimes suicidal Silk.  That such “imprints” will be left behind following “possession” is well established within the text.

On first reading, I had chalked up the evasive recounting of events on Green as resulting from the narrator’s unwillingness to relive them in detail.  I still think this is true, but they would also have been to a large extent someone else’s memories (very unpleasant ones, for the most part, although later astral “journeys” to Green are notably free of the horror aspects of Horn’s original trip).

The Nature of the Inhumi

The inhumi are the most fascinating aspects of the Short Sun.  First, Wolfe’s little game with their appellation: it apparently comes from the practice of “inhuming” (burying alive) captured inhumi, but obviously also sounds like “inhuman”.  Duh.

Anyway: The inhumi live and breed on Green.  They can fly from Green to Blue when the planets’ orbits are closest: a piddly “thirty five thousand leagues” i.e. about 120,000 miles or half the distance from Earth to the Moon.  They live by drinking blood and can shapeshift in order to get close to their targets.  Their true form is a sort of scaly, reptilian leech.

Wolfe manipulates his portrayal of the inhumi to inspire both horror and pity at different times.  Over the course of the books, it is revealed that the inhumi mimic not merely the form but the consciousness — possibly even the souls — of their victims, and pass these traits onto their offspring.  The implication is that ultimately the inhumi cannot rise in violence and evil above the humans on whom they feed.  Indeed — they might become good, although this appears less certain.

The inhumi in fact appear to be frankly demonic.  Silk speaks authoritatively that they have a fundamental inhuman malignancy.  Yet he appears to think that the proper response to these demonic creatures is to love them so far as possible (though he — probably assisted by Horn — kills an inhumi he had previously adopted as a daughter in Return to the Whorl after she attempts an extremely evil act without warning.  This may represent a limiting case.)  Other aspects of the inhumi appear demonic; the parody of human life they enact among themselves is both horrific and tragic (we see the horror first).  That they yearn to be human but cannot — and are driven to spite and evil by this fact — matches portrayals of demons elsewhere, such as Satan’s attitude towards Adam in Paradise Lost.

Probably the treatment Silk advocates for the inhumi is intended, ultimately, to benefit the souls of humans rather than the inhumi.  Likewise, Silk/Horn realizes that while manipulating the inhumi to aid him might be helpful in the short run, it is not merely physically dangerous to the individual doing so but will unleash deeper, more serious forms of corruption.

(Others who don’t know the mechanics of what Silk/Horn did ascribe the effects to “magic”, and he denies such a thing exists even though he binds demons to pacts in order to accomplish superhuman feats and scourge his enemies.  An amazing touch.)

The inhumi claim to fly between Green and Blue is suspicious, but on the other hand they can clearly survive burial for years.  I don’t think a giant bat can plausibly reach escape velocity unless Blue and Green are much less massive than assumed.  Perhaps something else is going on involving their preternatural/psychic deception ability that allows them to fly between planets without using a spacecraft.  Or maybe it’s all a lie and they’re completely reliant on captured spacecraft.  I suspect the former, and that the ability was somehow “inherited” from the Neighbors, but I could be convinced otherwise.  I do think the travel occurs and that the inhumi cannot spawn on Blue.

Blue and Green are Ushas (?)

The Wolfe scholar Marc Aramini has a theory that Blue and Green are Mars and Urth/Earth, respectively (I’m going to call it Urth to avoid detailing Wolfe’s cosmology).  Basically, the Whorl left Urth in the reign of Typhon (whom we meet in New Sun; Typhon is undoubtedly the Zeus-like Pas, this is made absolutely clear) long before the events of New Sun.  Although only somewhere between three and four hundred years passed subjectively aboard the Whorl, far more time passed on Urth because of time dilation.  In the meantime, the New Sun came, flooded Urth, and perturbed the orbits of the planets (which may also have been artificially adjusted to bring them both into a more commodious distance zone).  This accounts for the absence of the Moon and the unfamiliar orbits of Green & Blue.  The “City of the Inhumi” on Green is Nessus.  The Neighbors are a plant-human hybrid developed on Mars.  Anyway, the Whorl went out into space, then turned around and came back.

I’m going to admit something: I have an aesthetic objection — I just don’t like this.  Making the Whorl’s journey all about old Urth instead of a new beginning around a new star just doesn’t sit well with me.  In Vance’s Dying Earth, the story of Guyal the Curator tells of the eponymous character’s escape from the Dying Earth into space while noting that others have done the same.  The point is that the universe is bigger than Urth and and that other possibilities exist out there rather than making it all about one rock.

By far the most suspicious thing about this theory is that never, not once, do any of the characters note a difference in gravity between the two worlds.  Mars gravity is one third that of Earth’s.  Severian might have elided his observation of such a detail, but Short Sun’s narrator would not.  If anything, the prodigious size of the trees on Green suggests that if either has weaker gravity, it’s Green.  Yes, there are parallels between the crumbling world of New Sun and the decayed Green; the two do remind the narrator of each other.  Of course, Green also reminds the narrator of Urth’s Lune (it’s green, probably from terraforming) but Green is definitely not the Urth’s moon.

The most intriguing aspect of Aramini’s theory is that it accounts for the existence of Martian plant men i.e., the Neighbors are trees.  Also that the inhumi are the lianas on Green’s trees.  There is certainly something going on with the trees and lianas that is never made explicit in the text because it is outside of the narrator’s understanding.  Also, the “Green Man”, oblique references to a plant-human hybrid, and Mars in general from New Sun are serious dangling threads to that story, something that Wolfe very likely intended to use later within the setting.

That being said, textual objections aside, I just don’t like it.

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  1. Marc Aramini

    Of course you are free to dislike it. The thematic reasons for green being Urth are similar to Silk’s denial of himself: there are some truths about humanity and the self that no one can bear- and one of them also involves the people of blue looking at the inhumi and seeing evil and ignoring their own evil, seeing the inhumi as intrinsically different. Blue is the actual hell planet because of people in denial about their natures. Also, the observation that Horn went into Babbie at the end was also mine – sitting under the tree, the vanished God 😉 lots of resistance to that idea on the Urth list for years. gotta take credit for the rough and the smooth, eh?

    • I would be much more willing to buy the Blue Verthandi theory if the gravity difference were accounted for or mentioned at all. As it is, it’s at best highly ambiguous. And Wolfe doesn’t seem to like fundamental ambiguity — there IS an answer to all the puzzles he presents, as far as I’ve seen. So I think the Short Sun is probably not Sol, and the parallels the narrator does notice are the result of fundamental similarities among conscious beings, along the lines of CS Lewis’ ideas in Perelandra.

      • Marc Aramini

        You are right – there are real solutions. Mars and Lune were both terraformed. There is even some indication in what Rudesind says, whether he has knowledge that is accurate or not, that Lune is much bigger than it once was to maintain an atmosphere. But as I said, one of the themes of the book is that these people can’t recognize who or what they truly are, and that this is a problem which separates them from clarity. If you have dug in the Urth list, then you know exactly whom the first idea that Green is Urth originated with – it wasn’t me. But that’s all I’ll say about it here.

  2. Phil

    Hi gentlemen. The one last thing that, to me contradicts the urth/green theory (complete planetary system actually) is the following quote from chap19 of RTTW:
    “If we still haven’t gone, we’ll go up onto the roof of this house. Standing on the tiles I will point and you will
    peer until at last you see a certain dim red star. It’s a long, long way from
    here. Think of it now, the sky like black velvet strewn with diamonds in the
    bottom of a grave, and among the diamonds a minute drop of blood.
    “There is a whorl circling that star, an ancient whorl.”

    I’d like to know how marc (or anyone else) reconciles the fact that the red sun can (supposedly) be observed from Blue, if it’s the star (although revived by Severian’s crusade). Everything else seems to fit with Marc’s theory but this part doesn’t, the way I read and understand it.

  3. RS

    I read the first book of the Long Sun when I was a teenager, translated into Polish, around 2001, maybe 2002. Didn’t remember much from the first reading except for the fact that the main character was a priest who encountered a goddess through a monitor…

    Then, around 2010-12 I found the 1st Torturer book in a cheap books store. Instantly fell in love with it, the style, the universum, the characters, the bizarre medieval-like yet in fact sf world.

    (As a matter of fact, my in-law read the 1st Torturer book as a young adult, published in fragments in a sf magazine in the 80ties. I remember how by chance we spoke about a book in which there was an Autarch (or a Despot in his old translation) and how it kinda brought us together… Wasn’t even my in-law back then!)

    I took me a while to collect all 5 “Torturers”.

    Then, there was a re-read in 2015/6.

    Then, my in-law (who hadn’t read the Long Sun yet) told me about the Short Sun. The reading followed.

    Now, in 2022, I’m reading all of them againg, one by one, as a whole. Each frigging time, I’m discovering new ideas, new ways of how to interpret the events etc. Sometimes I feel like I don’t have the mental capacity to follow the G.W.’s ideas. I would get lost in the eidolons or how did Horn merge with Silk (“it must be magic”, would say some, heh).

    Now, being at the Blue again, I discovered the power of forums and reddit.

    Looking for answers.

    Certainly not my final run on G.W.!

    I have a feeling, he’s one of the most underrated masters of literature, sadly. Every serie has a different approach to the narrative, different characters and challenges for the reader. I can’t say I like the idea of Green and Blue being Earth and Mar but maybe I look at it in a too short time span. There were thousands of years between the Conciliator and Severian, and who knows, maybe millions between the arrival of the whorl back to the solar system? Giving the Nighbours time to evolve?

    At first I thought maybe the colonists somehow returned to Urth before Severian’s time and brought with themselves or allowed coming of the being such as Abaia (Algae’s Mother or a similar being?).

    What made me think that maybe Aramini’s theory is true, was that when you think of it, maybe it was the other way around? Abaia-lings were already there after the flood! They weren’t supposed to come, because they just survived and remained on Usha!

    I guess we will never know what happened to the peoples saved by Severian… What we may be sure of, is that G.W. mind was great. R.I.P.

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